He was in mid twenties, single and far away from his place. He just got a job in NY and every morning used to commute through a metro feeder bus followed by metro train to his office. It was the 3rd day on the bus stop when he took notice of tall, attractive, dusky and sharp-eyed beautiful girl (she was 20 or 21). Actually she too used to catch bus on the same route, two stops next to him.
Their eyes met again and again but nobody exchanged smiles or Hi. It kept on going for weeks. Time passed from September to December and it was snow all over, for one week he used his friend’s car to commute to office and after five-day when he reached bus stop, he heard a sweet voice.
She: Hey, How are you?
He: I am good, thanks and you?
She: Why were you not coming to bus stop, I thought you’ve left United States or moved somewhere?
He: No, I was using my friend’s car last whole week!
They exchanged names and locations (she was from California studying & working in NY)
She: So, is he gone? Will you come to bus stop now?
He: Yes, no other alternative!
Suddenly bus arrives and they both sat together for the first time. It became a habit by each passing day. The feeling to go to office has a new motivation now, every morning was like a fresh ray of hope meeting that special stranger along with rapid heartbeat and butterflies in stomach – a bus date.
One day in bus she hold her hand, gazed into his eyes as if she dived deep into his heart and nothing is remained to hide. That day exchanged so many special memories about her childhood and how she miss him when he does not come to bus stop, it was Friday.
Unfortunately snow-storms were frequent that month and he had to take lift from friend for another entire week. After one week he reached that stop, his eyes were searching her everywhere but no luck. He did not have her phone number, address or any other clue, he waited for her during his entire stay of 1 year but never got the chance to see that special co – Passenger again.
Don’t know what to call it, how to name it – but that Passenger will always remain live in his memories ….
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A lovely take on the prompt; thank you for sharing!
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Sometimes I prefer real sweet little things over generic abstract thoughts. Thank you sooo much for your lovely comment Emily 🙂 . I hope that is your name?
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I completely agree, it’s a great way to think about things. You’re very welcome, I enjoyed it! And yes that is my name haha! 🙂
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Great …. its quite a popular name, already some 2-3 Hollywood movies are based on this name, not sure if you featured in one of them or may be in next release 😛 😉
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It was lovely reading it. I was just looking for something such, sweet and short to read. Heart goes out to that lovely passenger, may she dwell in the best of everything. And life is sometimes so unfair, we meet, we like, we familiarize, we distance.. we forgo..
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Your comment itself is no less lovely and sweet than the story itself. Thank you so much 🙂 . Less words, real & honest things works for everyone, this is my belief while I write. Do share your feedback on other/future posts, would love to hear!
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Would love to respond, because yes, keeping short and real strikes the hardest.
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His love story ended even before it could begin
Girls are troublemaker ..😂😂😂
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It was not his love story, but yes it could be their’s 🙂
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Romantic Saturday Night 😍
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WordPress cheated on me 😖😝
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Glad you liked it 🙂
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I will use some against you …
You will like it more 🤗
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I haven’t received any ping ? 😂
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does not matter.. enjoy!
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This has made my day! An absolutely lovely story, with an unfortunate end. But heyho, that’s life I guess. 🙂
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Thanks a lot for reading and so happy that it touched you. Actually its not unfortunate or sad…its kind of an incomplete end…may be they were meant for crossing the path only and leaving a memory for lifetime ☺☺
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Should defo try and see if they can find each other, or maybe they are???
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Its happened 5-6 years back, I am sure they never met again!
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You’re an amazing writer!!! This is awesome!
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This is so kind of you, glad with the fact that you liked it! TY 🙂
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Np
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Hey! I think you might enjoy my latest post https://tanyatale.wordpress.com/2017/07/07/bridge-of-eternal-love/
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Yes, I already liked it 🙂
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